Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them to be able to study what to do otherwise.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
E mail
Will,
I needed to observe up on my final e mail.
Our retention charge working with firms like yours is 87% after 2 months as a result of we maintain bringing them new clients.
Our e mail tech + your killer supply, despatched 100s of instances a day to focused lead lists – you’ll persistently generate leads.
Merely put – what we do, works.
As a result of we’re particularly searching for knowledge, analytics and software program firms just like you, we solely have 5 spots accessible in your business.
Would you be open to debate the above over a fast 15-minute name?
Comply with Up 1: BAR Your Case Examine
Will, are you accustomed to _____?
Once we met them, they gave the impression to be at an analogous stage. Most leads got here by way of their PLG movement.
We bolted onto their outbound workforce. Particularly, we centered on serving to scale up their particular person person base.
Consequently, their workforce needed to 2x to handle the certified inbound. Month-to-month MRR development has 2x’d.
Has your workforce accomplished any outbound for this but?
Comply with Up 2: Considerate Bump
Hey Will, did you catch my notice?
I reached out as a result of we’ve been having plenty of success working with PLG pushed firms.
If outsourcing a few of your outbound isn’t a precedence, simply let me know. Blissful to share a few of what we’ve seen working.
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