Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them as a way to be taught what to do in a different way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising and marketing at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
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The Unhappy State of InMail
Topic: AI/ML and Large Information Tech Workforce At COMPANY
I hope you might be doing nicely.
I’m writing to you to discover alternatives for our firms to work collectively.
Over time, we’ve constructed sturdy capabilities within the space of Large information and AI/ML. We work as an offshore supply heart for plenty of US-based tech firms. This engagement offers our purchasers substantial value benefit and entry to a tech workforce that works 24/7.
COMPANY India Restricted is a publicly listed firm on India’s largest inventory trade, Nationwide Inventory Change (NSE), having a workforce of 350+ builders and designers and 30+ world purchasers with our Places of work within the USA, India & East Africa
Our workforce relies out of US. Wouldn’t it be attainable to satisfy you over a cup of espresso someday within the subsequent few days and share our price proposition?
Regards,
Rep Rep Rep
Advertising and marketing Affiliate
COMPANY
www.COMPANY.com
Right here’s what your reader sees
Desktop view
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Take 1: Personalization Sandwich 🥪 (29 phrases)
Topic: Your Publication
Will, in your weekly e mail you talked about hiring for AI.
Doesn’t appear to be you’ve crammed the function. Have you ever thought-about non-US expertise for the place?
Love what you’re constructing.
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Take 2: Double Remark (43 phrases)
Topic: Lavender Product Query
Will – testing Lavender’s product. Looks as if the info it generates is driving plenty of your content material.
I’d guess Eng is strapped to deal with roadmap. Any ideas on an element time AI workforce to assist unearth nuggets on your content material technique?
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