Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so to be taught what to do in another way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Topic: Your new POC (Firm)
Hello Will,
Comfortable Halloween! Know you’ve been engaged with Your Contact since early Summer season,however in the present day was Your’s final day with Firm. Reaching out with a pleasant “hi there” as I’ll be your new level of contact transferring ahead!
Thought to shoot you an invitation to Firm’s Activate Tour NYC coming November ninth from 4-8 pm! It’d be nice to fulfill you in individual because it’ll be an superior evening to attach with fellow entrepreneurs, Firm execs, and Firm prospects in NYC. Would love so that you can pop by and community with fellow leaders inside the business!
Congratulations in your continued success and hopefully I’ll see you there!
Kindly,
Take 1
Topic: NYC Wednesday?
Will –
We’re internet hosting an occasion for advertising leaders this Wednesday. Can I depend you in?
We’re getting a few of our prime Firm prospects in NYC collectively. Thought you’d get pleasure from.
I do know your cofounders are primarily based in NYC. Noticed your location set to Atlanta, however I wasn’t positive in the event you’d be round.
Will
Ps. It’s been a minute because you final caught up along with your account supervisor Niki. She’s since left, so just a little heads up I’ll be your new level of contact.
Take 2
Topic:
Firm | bandwidth | NYC
Hey Will,
You final related with us in June. It didn’t appear you had time to deal with implementing Firm then.
Given the posts on hiring, I used to be curious if issues have modified.
Will
Ps. Know you and your cofounders have been touring. You in NYC on Wednesday? We’re getting a number of advertising leaders collectively for dinner & drinks.
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