Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them as a way to study what to do otherwise.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Topic: Going to SaaStr this yr?
Hiya Will,
xxxxxxx is an occasion sponsor from Sept thirteenth – fifteenth and will likely be situated at Sales space #xxx.
For a little bit of context, xxxxxxx is a product-led development platform for internet and cellular merchandise that helps firms optimize their person’s expertise with instruments like in-app onboarding checklists, bulletins, product excursions, and surveys.
Firms generally strategy xxxxxxx searching for assist with:
- Consumer Onboarding
- Activation & Conversion Charges
- New Function Adoption
- Churn & Retention
If any of this resonates with you, come go to our sales space at SaaStr! Can’t make it? Schedule a demo right here as an alternative.
Hope to see you there.
xxxxxxx
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Take 1: Did My Homework
Topic: PLG @ SaaStr
Noticed you and the crew are headed to SaaStr, Will!
I wished to catch up on the occasion. With Dorothy and Josh approaching board to guide gross sales, I think about you’re utilizing product information to assist prioritize their time.
Curious to study what you’ve been doing to leverage product information. We assist groups discover the indicators to ship extra scaled interactions… or interventions.
Will
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Take 2: Didn’t Do My Homework
Topic: PLG @ SaaStr
Is the crew heading to SaaStr, Will?
We’re reaching out to PLG firms to attach on the occasion. We assist PLG groups make sense of their product information to tweak issues like onboarding and decreasing churn.
In case you are, I’d like to catch up. We have now a sales space (#123) however would love to attach 1:1.
Let me know!
Will
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